tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1064125998898504251.post2156620369078422627..comments2023-09-24T08:59:42.175-05:00Comments on Powder Burns & Bullets: #FridayFlash - Laws of NatureStephenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04753736809917062955noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1064125998898504251.post-509478417605621342014-10-02T22:49:29.136-05:002014-10-02T22:49:29.136-05:00I really like the balance you have in your crime f...I really like the balance you have in your crime fiction. You stand at the precipice just outside total anarchy. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13096021087395266714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1064125998898504251.post-45291930414157204002014-09-27T19:18:09.099-05:002014-09-27T19:18:09.099-05:00Thank you for catching the typo, Helen. I sincerel...Thank you for catching the typo, Helen. I sincerely appreciate it. Sometimes, something so painfully obvious slips by me. I don't even know why I would have typed that. <br /><br />And I agree. There must be some level of stress on the heart that can't be matched in any sort of testing. My guess is being found out is just that level that can't be reached. I wonder if it would take your heart right up to the point of exploding. Thankfully, I will never know.Stephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04753736809917062955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1064125998898504251.post-23246435772551465432014-09-27T17:59:02.785-05:002014-09-27T17:59:02.785-05:00I think the worst job would be to be an undercover...I think the worst job would be to be an undercover agent and then be found out. Great story as always Stephen.<br /><br />I think I found a typo for you: " it landed need the body" did you mean near instead of need?Helen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1064125998898504251.post-22657762731189427862014-09-27T13:19:39.871-05:002014-09-27T13:19:39.871-05:00Thank you, Marc. I like them nice and gritty, too....Thank you, Marc. I like them nice and gritty, too.Stephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04753736809917062955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1064125998898504251.post-45087115553107700862014-09-27T10:05:57.301-05:002014-09-27T10:05:57.301-05:00I agree with you, Steve. Living undercover would b...I agree with you, Steve. Living undercover would be particularly stressful. I can't imagine doing it. Stephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04753736809917062955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1064125998898504251.post-42781410381095842792014-09-27T05:01:00.684-05:002014-09-27T05:01:00.684-05:00this is the derivation of the word 'outlaw'...this is the derivation of the word 'outlaw' those who make decisions to stand outside the law. Nice and gritty, just to my tasteSulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1064125998898504251.post-43532003580205320072014-09-27T02:43:58.122-05:002014-09-27T02:43:58.122-05:00I guess their deaths will at least be useful to he...I guess their deaths will at least be useful to help something else flourish.<br /><br />I would imagine undercover work is amongst the most stressful of assignments, most dangerous too. A man would always have two inner selfs working inside him at the same time, and always be wary of letting the wrong one show at any given time.<br /><br />A nicely written short, as always Stephen. You always fill your characters with real life, and believable dialogue.Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.com