tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1064125998898504251.post5839785827752789887..comments2023-09-24T08:59:42.175-05:00Comments on Powder Burns & Bullets: #FridayFlash - "A Justifiable Defense"Stephenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04753736809917062955noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1064125998898504251.post-41397211030205092722010-10-19T16:06:36.963-05:002010-10-19T16:06:36.963-05:00Wow, Stephen! This is a real departure for you. Fu...Wow, Stephen! This is a real departure for you. Fun to see you stretch your legs a little.Greta Iglhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10647468825542451799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1064125998898504251.post-16788289581381419852010-10-11T01:30:44.038-05:002010-10-11T01:30:44.038-05:00Hope you can become a writer for suspense movies !...Hope you can become a writer for suspense movies ! great dudeCrime Scene Investigator Job Descriptionhttp://www.samplejobdescriptions.org/crime-scene-investigator-job-description.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1064125998898504251.post-77306800990992873192010-10-10T13:07:21.330-05:002010-10-10T13:07:21.330-05:00Thank you both for the feedback. I wondered a litt...Thank you both for the feedback. I wondered a little about the language, the unusual words, and I glad to see that it helped lock in the story for you. The funny thing about SciFi, especially in cases like the movie Serenity, you can create words to say what we would normally say here, like the use of "Smiley!" in Serenity as a replacement for S*%t!. Anyway, thank you both for stopping by.Stephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04753736809917062955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1064125998898504251.post-29379522559584280462010-10-10T11:58:25.568-05:002010-10-10T11:58:25.568-05:00I love the language you used in this piece (esp. t...I love the language you used in this piece (esp. the snark house). I found the pilot a little creepy (not a bad thing... I write creepy characters myself occasionally), and wondered whether the pet would explode when he'd killed his cousin.AidanFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1064125998898504251.post-38599947870004714002010-10-09T15:00:48.174-05:002010-10-09T15:00:48.174-05:00That's a really interesting story. The languag...That's a really interesting story. The language at the beginning, the gradual reveal of the backstory- very well handled, I thought!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com