tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1064125998898504251.post6971735539257661216..comments2023-09-24T08:59:42.175-05:00Comments on Powder Burns & Bullets: #FridayFlash - Standard PolicyStephenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04753736809917062955noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1064125998898504251.post-86147421163624249172011-02-21T22:25:28.816-06:002011-02-21T22:25:28.816-06:00Justin: Hey, I'm glad you liked that line. I w...Justin: Hey, I'm glad you liked that line. I wish I had a dollar for every time I've heard slippers whispering through my house. It seems like everyone sort of shuffles along.Stephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04753736809917062955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1064125998898504251.post-59202717213001003612011-02-21T14:16:12.611-06:002011-02-21T14:16:12.611-06:00My favourite line :
"Sheryl walked across the...My favourite line :<br />"Sheryl walked across the linoleum, her fuzzy slippers whispering to each other with every step"<br /><br />Great stuff!<br />As Icy said, packed with description.<br />Also packed with fun and teasing, whilst staying realistic with her kids and making the breakfast and the smoking.<br />This all makes the twist that much more of a surprise.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1064125998898504251.post-40697501661305725422011-02-19T13:30:07.933-06:002011-02-19T13:30:07.933-06:00Thanks, Icy. I'm glad it worked.Thanks, Icy. I'm glad it worked.Stephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04753736809917062955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1064125998898504251.post-41981223829512117172011-02-19T10:12:04.231-06:002011-02-19T10:12:04.231-06:00Oh I loved this. I was wondering what it was that ...Oh I loved this. I was wondering what it was that he was really for, but never in a month of Sundays would I have seen that ending coming! Very good flash, and it's just packed with such details.Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1064125998898504251.post-75731973720780238002011-02-18T18:32:19.332-06:002011-02-18T18:32:19.332-06:00Thanks, guys.
John: I've been thinking about ...Thanks, guys.<br /><br />John: I've been thinking about how I could add Billy Bob into a story somewhere. I finally did it.<br /><br />Eric: Can't you imagine the things a guy like that would see? But that's another story.<br /><br />Harry: Thanks. I liked the way this character thought and talked. I thought it added to her persona. If I'd thought about it, I could have added snapping bubble gum and a "Kiss my grits" line. :)<br /><br />Steve: Don't you know it? If such a policy like this existed, I bet we wouldn't see so much of the other. Thank God we don't have policies like this. Just think about the examples that would have to be set and the time it would take for the societal learning curve.Stephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04753736809917062955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1064125998898504251.post-61122256814724108832011-02-18T16:09:14.885-06:002011-02-18T16:09:14.885-06:00Nicely written Stephen, and if this type of policy...Nicely written Stephen, and if this type of policy exists... there must be a lot of guys out there keeping a very low profile. :DSteve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1064125998898504251.post-24326967558423307422011-02-18T13:52:48.076-06:002011-02-18T13:52:48.076-06:00Ha! Easy Peasy reading piece of work here too Step...Ha! Easy Peasy reading piece of work here too Stephen!Harryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09628269009060185397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1064125998898504251.post-38917423635796532282011-02-18T11:18:08.557-06:002011-02-18T11:18:08.557-06:00Good one! You had me convinced he was checking in ...Good one! You had me convinced he was checking in for a regular insurance policy all the way to the end. Good twist!Eric J. Krausehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1064125998898504251.post-5352944172508195782011-02-18T03:33:43.825-06:002011-02-18T03:33:43.825-06:00Rarely does an Alegria cross a Billy Bob.Rarely does an Alegria cross a Billy Bob.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.com